Nice designs. I like them. PØST. to get the slash through the O on mac: option key + O= Ø, never use the work gallery. POST, all caps, I wanted to suggest that it stood for something, concrete poetry in one word. The new name has the slash through the O, making it a zero, nothing, null, an empty set...
I think the first one works best. High-contrast and eye-catching. I love the title image, but the text font is hard to read and incongruous with the entire design.
I agree that the text is hard to read so a font change is in order. It's a nice graphic element and out of the three cards, I like the B$W best. Even so, I think the image is too suggestive and would prefer something that is more ambiguous leaving less room for preconceived notions about the content of the exhibit. Adrienne
I really like this idea...I don't like using color unless it is very subtle. I think instead of changing the font, use lowercase lettering. All uppercase is hard to read as a rule. I like the second announcement better, it reads like a front and back though. Could it be a front and back. Just put the lower half on back. If it is only a one sided announcement, then I like the original better.
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ReplyDeleteNice designs. I like them. PØST. to get the slash through the O on mac: option key + O= Ø, never use the work gallery. POST, all caps, I wanted to suggest that it stood for something, concrete poetry in one word. The new name has the slash through the O, making it a zero, nothing, null, an empty set...
ReplyDeleteI think the first one works best. High-contrast and eye-catching. I love the title image, but the text font is hard to read and incongruous with the entire design.
ReplyDeleteI agree that the text is hard to read so a font change is in order. It's a nice graphic element and out of the three cards, I like the B$W best.
ReplyDeleteEven so, I think the image is too suggestive and would prefer something that is more ambiguous leaving less room for preconceived notions about the content of the exhibit.
Adrienne
I love the text - a gradual decline, I think some color would be cool too, but absolutly not red!
ReplyDeleteI really like this idea...I don't like using color unless it is very subtle. I think instead of changing the font, use lowercase lettering. All uppercase is hard to read as a rule. I like the second announcement better, it reads like a front and back though. Could it be a front and back. Just put the lower half on back. If it is only a one sided announcement, then I like the original better.
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